Services

Services

My developmental edit is an in-depth study of your manuscript, with a concentration on:
  • development of plot, characters and story flow
  • point of view
  • continuity
  • clarity
  • timeline
  • trimming/adding/rearranging content to address pace
  • sentence structure
  • grammar
  • punctuation
  • spelling/typos
I return the completed edit to you electronically in two files.
One file is your manuscript with my edits, questions and comments typed in.
The other file is a redlined edit, where my typed changes are clearly notated with strike-through marks (indicating text I have moved or deleted) and double underlines (indicating text I have added).
The simpler you say it, the more eloquent it is.

August Wilson

Sample Redline Edit
Sample Edit